oh, the dialogue in it is charming. it's lovely to keep laughing over something so nice. (not to mention the sex is hawt.) i love this, which shows jonathan the way i'd want him to be:

...He slipped his hand under Whitney's shirt.

They stopped when they heard Jonathan clearing his throat loudly in the next room. "I'm going into the room where Clark and Whitney are," he called. "I'm going to walk right in there."

Clark and Whitney smirked and moved away from each other....